Well taken. A slight blur is evident on the butterfly and the plant, which is understandable considering the movement involved.

It's a nice photo, no doubts about that!
But, of course, it could be a little bit better. Your first mistake (or maybe just bad luck, the same happens to me) was the wrong focusing. You only focused the right wing of the butterfly, the furthest. This, as you can obvisouly see, sacrificed a lot of detail and sharpness of the photo's main details: the butterfly itself and the flower are somewhat blurry. The gray/dark background does not help either, but of course this is not your fault It's not like we can always choose our backgrounds... Anyway, considering how hard taking extreme close-ups shots can be (especially with equipment not especialized for that subject), you have yourself a nice shot and something that can really impress people.

netlik ayarinda bir problem var gibi gorunse de genel manada fena bi foto degil. eline saglik. üst bosluk cok fazla gibi geldi bana.

Nice close up man. Keep at it - Kris

If this is your first attempt your doing bloody good............

Very good first attempt!.....beautiful colors and composition!....agree a little more dof would be nice.
Carlos

good colors. I would off center the composition.
not sharp enough.
good luck to the next one!!
Florin

sorry .. double post

vay vay vay tekrar hosgeldin
neler de yaparmissinsen boyle
biraz netlikte sorun var galiba
neyse canim ilk denemenmis
gelistirirsin
eline gozune saglik canim